I am a Year 7 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
hey liyhan! i think your holidays were cool but everything get me when you mentioned BURGER KING! (∪ ◡ ∪) DELICE :3 well i hope you have a good day Goodbye By elise
Hi Liyahn.What a great imagination you have.I have been to the Margaret Mahy playground.I also thought that they big slide was scary.I was brave though and went down it,several times. I think the lie is the one about the whales,dolphins and mermaids.I know this because I was the mermaid.
hey liyhan! i think your holidays were cool but everything get me when you mentioned BURGER KING! (∪ ◡ ∪) DELICE :3 well i hope you have a good day Goodbye By elise
ReplyDeleteA nicely structured piece of writing. Very interesting. Well done. I don't think you saw the whales and the mermaid. Maybe the dolphins?
ReplyDeleteHi Liyahn.What a great imagination you have.I have been to the Margaret Mahy playground.I also thought that they big slide was scary.I was brave though and went down it,several times.
ReplyDeleteI think the lie is the one about the whales,dolphins and mermaids.I know this because I was the mermaid.
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