Kidnapped You!

Good morning awesome readers,

This term we are working on creating a strong narrative. It has to believable and descriptive.

Yesterday, we were learning to show not tell. We looked for all our action words to show them. Then We changed the weak action word to strong action words.

This is how we did it.

Here is a weak action word sentence.

This is sentence we changed: Al gave Miss D coffee.
Al kindly rewarded Miss D with a delicious, hot cappuccino.

Here is a picture of the cappuccino.
   

Thank you for reading my blog post to day. I hope you learnt something about strong adjective and how to changed your weak sentences.

Have an a amazing day :D!