I am a Year 7 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Liyahn! What a beautiful poem! You are one of the only people to have completed this correctly. Remember you can do something like this anytime and for any season too. Now it is autumn... maybe you can write one for autumn.
Hello Liyahn. Your poems are beautiful.Well done. Your spring poem reminds me of my time on the farm.I would go and pick bunches and bunches of daffodils and listen to the lambs bleating.They'd be bounding around chasing each other.The sky was blue and the sun was warm.THANK YOU.
Bonjour Liyahn. Yes things do seem more green in the spring. I love the line "No winter lasts forever" Thank goodness this is true! I also love spring...and autumn. So many changes in the trees and plants. Well done and au revoir.
Hi Liyahn!
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful poem! You are one of the only people to have completed this correctly. Remember you can do something like this anytime and for any season too. Now it is autumn... maybe you can write one for autumn.
:) Miss D
Hello Liyahn.
ReplyDeleteYour poems are beautiful.Well done.
Your spring poem reminds me of my time on the farm.I would go and pick bunches and bunches of daffodils and listen to the lambs bleating.They'd be bounding around chasing each other.The sky was blue and the sun was warm.THANK YOU.
Bonjour Liyahn. Yes things do seem more green in the spring. I love the line "No winter lasts forever" Thank goodness this is true!
ReplyDeleteI also love spring...and autumn. So many changes in the trees and plants.
Well done and au revoir.